Nice one.
You're doing great! I suspect that our honing is not that bad at all. I bet if you had that razor honed by a professional, you would have had a similar shave. That has been my experience.
Ditto what Noah writes above! Thanks for keeping up with the journal. It is encouraging for me to see that another is learning to hone and shave at the same time I am.
That was a 2-day shave, without using a DE for the first pass?
Right on! Good confidence booster.
(personnaly I enjoy axing 2-day growth with a straight. I like to see all that wreckage in the spent lather, even if it's more work.)
The first time I used glycerin as a pre-shave I was wowed by it. I might mix glycerin and pre-shave oil to see how that works.