Suzuki said:Better - still think you could shorten it if you took out the filler regarding the custom tailor, zen, etc. references and pictures.
Mike02 said:Good job Mark. I noticed there was some volume modulation from the old edits to the new stuff. The flow of the video was a little weird from "looking for a better way?" to the products like something was missing in between. Very good job overall though! -- Dennis
mantic said:Geez...Suzuki says there's too much and Magruder says there's not enough.