Are you a descendant of Douglas Adam's? You, very much, write like him. If so you should probably find a way to cash in on that. Hitchhikers guide to the galaxy is one of the greatest fiction series ever written if you ask me.
Haha, cheers! I used to write for a living briefly.
Reminds me actually - I've been meaning to re-read HHG, need to dig out my old copy.